1. If I were Andrew I would never count the freckles on the back of someone’s neck. I would never do that because it is disgusting.
2. If I were Sharon I wouldn’t tell Andrew about the recipe. I wouldn’t because I am not rude like Sharon is.
3. I would give Andrew a 4 to rate his thinking. I think that because at first he thought there was no such thing but he bought it anyway.
4. I think that if I were Andrew I would never believe in a freckle recipe. I know that freckles are genetic.
5. I think that if the recipe were healthy the story would be weirder. I think Andrew wouldn’t get sick and he’d put on normal colored freckles since he had time to look.
6. If Andrew went back for his money and Sharon gave it to him Andrew could still just draw them on. If he went back but got no money he might plan ahead to use a different color marker.
7. If I made my own Freckle Juice it would be completely different from Sharon’s. I would first put in salt, pickles, flour, sugar, eggs, and you would heat it in the microwave for 2 minutes then drink slowly.
8. I don’t think that he was completely convinced, but since he was obviously convinced enough to buy it the reasons are few. One was that none of his family had freckles so it had to be secret and the other reason would have to be the fact that he was so desperate for freckles.
9. I think that Mrs. Marcus went crazy when he saw the mess because she was overwhelmed. She probably was overwhelmed because of the huge mess in her now destroyed kitchen and because instead of doing what she had asked Andrew to do he decided to ruin her kitchen.
10. I would make few difficult changes to make it that Andrew wouldn’t get sick. First I would change the recipe so it would make something edible. Or I would have him read it and think that it’s a fake, and not drink it.
11.I think that Judy Blume called the medicine “ the pink stuff that tastes like peppermint” to make the story more interesting. If she had called it medicine it would have no fun or weird descriptions.
12. Andrew’s nightmares were kind of strange. It had Sharon as a monster and she was getting freckles instead of Andrew.
13.I would change the color marker to make it so that Andrew wouldn’t get embarrassed. I would make the marker brown so it would look more natural.
14.I think that if Andrew had gone to schoo1 without the fake freckles she would make fun of him. She would probably say that he didn’t get freckles and he actually believed her.
15. I think that it was nice of Miss Kelly to give Andrew the freckle remover. Andrew was a big distraction to the class and the most important reason that she gave it to him was for that.
16.I don’t think that Sharon really has a recipe for removing freckles. Since she lied about the one to make freckles, why wouldn’t she lie about the one to remove freckles.
17.I think that it is strange that Andrew and Nicky want to be like each other. They should probably just learn to except themselves for who the are.
18.If I made a person it would be Sharon’s best friend. She would know from Sharon and tell Andrew that it was fake right after he paid and she would demand Sharon to give Andrew his money back.
19.Andrew and his class have many conflicts. He interrupted them during reading and he distracted them with his fake freckles.
20.
Main Characters Sub Characters
Andrew Mrs. Marcus
Sharon Nicky Lane
Miss Kelly
There also needs to be a characteristic for each character described on this table. These could be only a few of them.
Andrew-freckle-less
Sharon-rude
Miss Kelly-caring
Mrs. Marcus-clean
Nicky Lane –freckle-full
You can take out only a few scenes, considering most of them have an important part in the story. You can take out the scene where Andrew was running home, and the sun was blazing down on him. You can also take out the scene where he went to the house where Mrs. Marcus was paying poker. There is one more scene that is possible to take out. It is where he misses going to his reading group.
21.To minimize the amount of scenes in this book, I would take out the scene where Andrew is running home and the sun is beating down on her. Another scene that is possible to take out is where he went inside of Mrs. Burrows house and Andrew got the key to the house from his mom. One more scene that is possible to take out is the scene where Andrew doesn’t go to his reading group.
22.To maximize the amount of scenes in the book, I would add a scene that showed Mrs. Kelly making the Freckle Remover after school. It would show her writing the recipe that was packed inside the package.
23.I would have Sharon tell Andrew that she was sorry for what she had done, and that she would pay him back the 50 cents she had “stolen” from him.
24.I wouldn’t have fallen for Sharon’s tricks, and that would have prevented the whole problem from happening.
25.The relationship between Andrew and Sharon is not very strong, the two don’t get along very well at all.
2. If I were Sharon I wouldn’t tell Andrew about the recipe. I wouldn’t because I am not rude like Sharon is.
3. I would give Andrew a 4 to rate his thinking. I think that because at first he thought there was no such thing but he bought it anyway.
4. I think that if I were Andrew I would never believe in a freckle recipe. I know that freckles are genetic.
5. I think that if the recipe were healthy the story would be weirder. I think Andrew wouldn’t get sick and he’d put on normal colored freckles since he had time to look.
6. If Andrew went back for his money and Sharon gave it to him Andrew could still just draw them on. If he went back but got no money he might plan ahead to use a different color marker.
7. If I made my own Freckle Juice it would be completely different from Sharon’s. I would first put in salt, pickles, flour, sugar, eggs, and you would heat it in the microwave for 2 minutes then drink slowly.
8. I don’t think that he was completely convinced, but since he was obviously convinced enough to buy it the reasons are few. One was that none of his family had freckles so it had to be secret and the other reason would have to be the fact that he was so desperate for freckles.
9. I think that Mrs. Marcus went crazy when he saw the mess because she was overwhelmed. She probably was overwhelmed because of the huge mess in her now destroyed kitchen and because instead of doing what she had asked Andrew to do he decided to ruin her kitchen.
10. I would make few difficult changes to make it that Andrew wouldn’t get sick. First I would change the recipe so it would make something edible. Or I would have him read it and think that it’s a fake, and not drink it.
11.I think that Judy Blume called the medicine “ the pink stuff that tastes like peppermint” to make the story more interesting. If she had called it medicine it would have no fun or weird descriptions.
12. Andrew’s nightmares were kind of strange. It had Sharon as a monster and she was getting freckles instead of Andrew.
13.I would change the color marker to make it so that Andrew wouldn’t get embarrassed. I would make the marker brown so it would look more natural.
14.I think that if Andrew had gone to schoo1 without the fake freckles she would make fun of him. She would probably say that he didn’t get freckles and he actually believed her.
15. I think that it was nice of Miss Kelly to give Andrew the freckle remover. Andrew was a big distraction to the class and the most important reason that she gave it to him was for that.
16.I don’t think that Sharon really has a recipe for removing freckles. Since she lied about the one to make freckles, why wouldn’t she lie about the one to remove freckles.
17.I think that it is strange that Andrew and Nicky want to be like each other. They should probably just learn to except themselves for who the are.
18.If I made a person it would be Sharon’s best friend. She would know from Sharon and tell Andrew that it was fake right after he paid and she would demand Sharon to give Andrew his money back.
19.Andrew and his class have many conflicts. He interrupted them during reading and he distracted them with his fake freckles.
20.
Main Characters Sub Characters
Andrew Mrs. Marcus
Sharon Nicky Lane
Miss Kelly
There also needs to be a characteristic for each character described on this table. These could be only a few of them.
Andrew-freckle-less
Sharon-rude
Miss Kelly-caring
Mrs. Marcus-clean
Nicky Lane –freckle-full
You can take out only a few scenes, considering most of them have an important part in the story. You can take out the scene where Andrew was running home, and the sun was blazing down on him. You can also take out the scene where he went to the house where Mrs. Marcus was paying poker. There is one more scene that is possible to take out. It is where he misses going to his reading group.
21.To minimize the amount of scenes in this book, I would take out the scene where Andrew is running home and the sun is beating down on her. Another scene that is possible to take out is where he went inside of Mrs. Burrows house and Andrew got the key to the house from his mom. One more scene that is possible to take out is the scene where Andrew doesn’t go to his reading group.
22.To maximize the amount of scenes in the book, I would add a scene that showed Mrs. Kelly making the Freckle Remover after school. It would show her writing the recipe that was packed inside the package.
23.I would have Sharon tell Andrew that she was sorry for what she had done, and that she would pay him back the 50 cents she had “stolen” from him.
24.I wouldn’t have fallen for Sharon’s tricks, and that would have prevented the whole problem from happening.
25.The relationship between Andrew and Sharon is not very strong, the two don’t get along very well at all.
